I thought your elevator pitch was simply fantastic! Very professional and I like how you use statistics and research to prove their is an unmet need before providing a convincing solution. Your elevator pitch is the correct time length. You make a good job, my only feedback would be to maybe sound a little less rehearsed and have a little more energy. But overall this is fantastic. Well done, very nice job!
Hi Julia, I thought you did a really great job on your elevator pitch. I thought you looked very professional and you projected your voice nicely. I agree with Jade, when you used facts and other research as support, you were able to successfully inform your audience on the importance of your opportunity, while still selling your service at the same time. Also good job on keeping your pitch at the right length.
Hello Julia, Great job with the elevator pitch, it was really helpful that you added some statistical information, it helps to get an idea of the scope of the problem. You presented a clear idea of your business and what is your market segment. Moreover, I loved the way you explained every detailed and components of your business idea. Overall good job and I am exited to see how you keep developing your idea.
Great introduction to your elevator pitch! Creating a scenario was an effective strategy to get my attention and by following it up with statistics I could see you were well prepared and informed on what you're trying to sell. Doing this presents your opportunity very effectively and is a good transition into your product introduction. Identifying your prototypical customers and explaining the details of your product also showed me that you have an effective plan.
Hi Julia,
ReplyDeleteI thought your elevator pitch was simply fantastic! Very professional and I like how you use statistics and research to prove their is an unmet need before providing a convincing solution. Your elevator pitch is the correct time length. You make a good job, my only feedback would be to maybe sound a little less rehearsed and have a little more energy. But overall this is fantastic. Well done, very nice job!
Hi Julia,
ReplyDeleteI thought you did a really great job on your elevator pitch. I thought you looked very professional and you projected your voice nicely. I agree with Jade, when you used facts and other research as support, you were able to successfully inform your audience on the importance of your opportunity, while still selling your service at the same time. Also good job on keeping your pitch at the right length.
Hello Julia,
ReplyDeleteGreat job with the elevator pitch, it was really helpful that you added some statistical information, it helps to get an idea of the scope of the problem. You presented a clear idea of your business and what is your market segment. Moreover, I loved the way you explained every detailed and components of your business idea. Overall good job and I am exited to see how you keep developing your idea.
Great introduction to your elevator pitch! Creating a scenario was an effective strategy to get my attention and by following it up with statistics I could see you were well prepared and informed on what you're trying to sell. Doing this presents your opportunity very effectively and is a good transition into your product introduction. Identifying your prototypical customers and explaining the details of your product also showed me that you have an effective plan.
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