Assignment 22A: Elevator Pitch No. 3
- 1.) Elevator Pitch Youtube Link:
- 2.) Feedback Reflection:
- I received a lot of different feedback on my second elevator pitch. The majority of the feedback I received complimented the changes I made from the first elevator pitch. By adding emotion and changing the order of my facts and explanations, I think I was able to better caption the attention of the audience right at the beginning. Additionally, a lot of my feedback consisted of comments about my pace and hand gestures which added to the overall effect of the elevator pitch.
- 3.) What I Changed from Feedback:
- I have changed numerous aspects of my elevator pitch from the very first pitch I recorded and only made small changes from the second one I recorded. For this third elevator pitch I continued to add emotion to the information that I was explaining. Something that I changed was that I took out some content that was not necessarily needed so it brought my elevator pitch closer to the ninety second mark while making my information more to the point and concise.
Hi Julia,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed watching your final elevator pitch. I have definitely seen improvements on your final pitch compared to your first and second pitches. Figuring out which information was most important definitely contributed to strengthening your elevator pitch, since if it is too long no investor would listen or fully pay attention to your idea. Practice does make perfect, great job!
Hi Julia,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on your third elevator pitch! I think you have shown significant improvement from the first pitch to your final one. I think you did a nice job at taking out some information that was not necessary and getting more straight to the point. You also mixed in some more emotion which I thought really added to your pitch.
Hi Julia,
ReplyDeleteFantastic work on your third and final elevator pitch. After watching your previous pitches, I can see a clear improvement - and your pitches were great to begin with! You make a clear and conscious effort to keep a proffessional manner and keep your information concise. I like how you recognise which specific areas needed improvement and proactively worked on improving your pitch. Like I also said to Jessica, practice makes perfect so keep up the good work!